Thursday, December 24, 2009

Enology

Today, the only sibling that I had; my sister Plum has deceased. Plum was a hard-working woman and fulfilled her masters desires. Even thought it is a devastating death and hurts me a lot when I say she may Rest in Peace. Today i stand before you to tell you that today is the day she is free from this slavery and do as she pleases, away from the fields and unfairness to the land of the free. She has seen a lot in her days but none of all she was a witness of my rape. Plum was very dear to me and she was all I had, if only I could of blocked her from the wagon, but no i was to late. If only you could see the pain in her eyes when she was under the wagon bleeding to death. So now, I keep her in my heart with all the memories we had and say you will never be forgotten.

5 comments:

  1. Your eulogy is good. Plum was young but a hardworker. She was all Always had. I agree with you that Always was glad that Plum was finally set free.

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  2. I liked your eulogy a lot dude. I liked how you expressed yourself towards Plum. I liked how you explain that special impact she did in your life. Also I agree with you that she was a very hard working young woman.

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  3. Plum was a little 5 year old girl, but you told the way it should be told in Alway's perspective. Good work.

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  4. Good work, on showing always's pain and suffering. Particularly how you managed to describe the pain so vividly.

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  5. First, I suggest rereading your Eulogy and resubmit. You have several spelling and grammatical errors. On the surface it has errors and must be fixed. Also, please delete this music from your page. It is inappropriate

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